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Her long legs walk- In    -     out    In    -    out Of the shadows. Hips swinging like pendulums- Left  - right   left  - right, Creating echoes. Her cigarette smoke dances around the pyre: Puff  -  puff, cough  -  cough. And the tongue slithers like a reptile Hiss - hiss. She's lost in the city of Dreams. She's an L.A woman, L.A woman. Yet she's a dancing drunk Sip,   sip,   sip, Breaking the seams. Oh, she's dangerous. Intoxicating. Yeah, yeah. She's a disciple of Venus Going to work- To the brothel she goes. She wonders what it's like to be virtuous Pray  -   pray! But a full stomach relies on the next customer. Kiss   -   kiss. 'Time for bed, I guess' she wipes off the façade. And she slips back into the shadows. With her gold dust, whiskey and... She's a living hamartia. She's proud. But her words fail to be spoken out loud. P  a  r  t  i  a  l P  r  o  m  i  s  c  u  o  u  s P  e  n  u  m  b  r  a  l
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Jun 14, 2017
Jun 14, 2017 at 8:45 AM UTC
Penumbra
Her long legs walk- In    -     out    In    -    out Of the shadows. Hips swinging like pendulums- Left  - right   left  - right, Creating echoes. Her cigarette smoke dances around the pyre: Puff  -  puff, cough  -  cough. And the tongue slithers like a reptile Hiss - hiss. She's lost in the city of Dreams. She's an L.A woman, L.A woman. Yet she's a dancing drunk Sip,   sip,   sip, Breaking the seams. Oh, she's dangerous. Intoxicating. Yeah, yeah. She's a disciple of Venus Going to work- To the brothel she goes. She wonders what it's like to be virtuous Pray  -   pray! But a full stomach relies on the next customer. Kiss   -   kiss. 'Time for bed, I guess' she wipes off the façade. And she slips back into the shadows. With her gold dust, whiskey and... She's a living hamartia. She's proud. But her words fail to be spoken out loud. P  a  r  t  i  a  l P  r  o  m  i  s  c  u  o  u  s P  e  n  u  m  b  r  a  l
EleniC
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F/United Kingdom
Jun 14, 2017
Jun 14, 2017 at 8:45 AM UTC
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