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We were the transient children windswept youth marching to break the barrier between nightness and dawn whispering immigrant secrets of our fathers and mothers lying on rooftops yelling arrays of stars speeding away racing light racing racing racing hearts as we crawled down fire escapes to street corners to proselytize Amen Hari Krishna Namaste As-Salāmu 'Alaykum silent God
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May 8, 2012
May 8, 2012 at 3:48 AM UTC
Transients.
We were the transient children windswept youth marching to break the barrier between nightness and dawn whispering immigrant secrets of our fathers and mothers lying on rooftops yelling arrays of stars speeding away racing light racing racing racing hearts as we crawled down fire escapes to street corners to proselytize Amen Hari Krishna Namaste As-Salāmu 'Alaykum silent God
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May 8, 2012
May 8, 2012 at 3:48 AM UTC
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