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Subtle twists and turns Make my thoughts tangle Unsure of what hail Mary affirmation will redeem What little intellect inferior artists contain I am not being cruel Or even over judgemental Just honest. Truthful. Prescreened, pre-cleaned You did not pass muster Left on the stoop to await another bus Perhaps one more tolerant of shabby verse Hopefully a few extra seats will be open to house your assumptions Leaving ample space for your empty, arrogant rantings
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Apr 29, 2012
Apr 29, 2012 at 9:53 PM UTC
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Subtle twists and turns Make my thoughts tangle Unsure of what hail Mary affirmation will redeem What little intellect inferior artists contain I am not being cruel Or even over judgemental Just honest. Truthful. Prescreened, pre-cleaned You did not pass muster Left on the stoop to await another bus Perhaps one more tolerant of shabby verse Hopefully a few extra seats will be open to house your assumptions Leaving ample space for your empty, arrogant rantings
brook-ilges
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Apr 29, 2012
Apr 29, 2012 at 9:53 PM UTC
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