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I feel like I am lost Between thoughts Between muses Of better luck, and Of better luck next time. The pity that has crowned me For all to see, and feel, Comes rightfully, As I do pity myself, Like a mouse ought to In deepest winter. The mouse, however, Sleeps through it, While I turn and toss, Wrapped in my blanket And in thoughts of fortune And in my misfortune. I cannot complain; I have known a good life, A life with luck, A life with privilege Compared to the mouse's. Yet, I still feel lost Between thoughts Between muses Of better luck, And better luck Which I wish myself Next time.
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May 31, 2017
May 31, 2017 at 9:28 AM UTC
Of Luck and Better Luck
I feel like I am lost Between thoughts Between muses Of better luck, and Of better luck next time. The pity that has crowned me For all to see, and feel, Comes rightfully, As I do pity myself, Like a mouse ought to In deepest winter. The mouse, however, Sleeps through it, While I turn and toss, Wrapped in my blanket And in thoughts of fortune And in my misfortune. I cannot complain; I have known a good life, A life with luck, A life with privilege Compared to the mouse's. Yet, I still feel lost Between thoughts Between muses Of better luck, And better luck Which I wish myself Next time.
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May 31, 2017
May 31, 2017 at 9:28 AM UTC
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