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SCREAMING YELLING i'M dEfEaTeD i GIvE up i gIVE uP, oKaY? i give up i'll be obedient i'll be a good girl i'll be your star and you can stick me onto a podium i'll tell them about my troubles and then say it's all okay now. i give up. i thought you were different, that's all. i thought you were different i give up. i don't want to be obedient i don't want to be a good girl i don't want to be your star go ahead, scream. i'll say, "i'm sorry... i'll never do it again." then i'll go ahead and go do it again. you will threaten me. take things away. i can't hang out with friends anymore i can't have my computer anymore and finally you'll take something away that is so precious so dear to me and i'll strike back or leave hopefully.
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May 23, 2017
May 23, 2017 at 7:20 PM UTC
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SCREAMING YELLING i'M dEfEaTeD i GIvE up i gIVE uP, oKaY? i give up i'll be obedient i'll be a good girl i'll be your star and you can stick me onto a podium i'll tell them about my troubles and then say it's all okay now. i give up. i thought you were different, that's all. i thought you were different i give up. i don't want to be obedient i don't want to be a good girl i don't want to be your star go ahead, scream. i'll say, "i'm sorry... i'll never do it again." then i'll go ahead and go do it again. you will threaten me. take things away. i can't hang out with friends anymore i can't have my computer anymore and finally you'll take something away that is so precious so dear to me and i'll strike back or leave hopefully.
from anger to rebellious thoughts to hope. i think that's how it goes, but i'm still in the rebellious part.
amihereyet
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May 23, 2017
May 23, 2017 at 7:20 PM UTC
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