*In splendid repose
One blooming rose lies gleaming
Hummingbirds kiss her
The wind whispers their secrets
As the pollen keeps drifting*
May 22, 2017
May 22, 2017 at 1:38 PM UTC
*In splendid repose
One blooming rose lies gleaming
Hummingbirds kiss her
The wind whispers their secrets
As the pollen keeps drifting*
This is my first shot at a Tanka. Feedback is most welcome. I can’t really help getting somewhat anthropomorphic about it. Thanks Chaetura for reminding me of the word anthropomorphic.
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