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you said forever, but you lied, so i replaced you with someone who lied better he made me feel loved, and he, was grateful and he was kinder than you ever was instead of his hands he used pretty words but in the end, you all leave, the same marks and im not sure, which kind, which hurt, felt worse but i promise, this time i will learn never again will i consider, this lie this concept, the promise of forever
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May 21, 2017
May 21, 2017 at 4:35 PM UTC
forever
you said forever, but you lied, so i replaced you with someone who lied better he made me feel loved, and he, was grateful and he was kinder than you ever was instead of his hands he used pretty words but in the end, you all leave, the same marks and im not sure, which kind, which hurt, felt worse but i promise, this time i will learn never again will i consider, this lie this concept, the promise of forever
WillowLynn
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May 21, 2017
May 21, 2017 at 4:35 PM UTC
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