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I once knew a girl her Name was Liez she did not Have hair fingernails cartilage She had the nicest smile. When Liez smiled it was as rare as Feeling the last raindrop of a storm Remembering the last time your father Hoisted you up to sit on his shoulders the Last time you could sit with your legs Indian-style With your feet on top. When Liez died no one made a sound but they All cried and I did too.
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Feb 20, 2010
Feb 20, 2010 at 4:46 AM UTC
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I once knew a girl her Name was Liez she did not Have hair fingernails cartilage She had the nicest smile. When Liez smiled it was as rare as Feeling the last raindrop of a storm Remembering the last time your father Hoisted you up to sit on his shoulders the Last time you could sit with your legs Indian-style With your feet on top. When Liez died no one made a sound but they All cried and I did too.
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Feb 20, 2010
Feb 20, 2010 at 4:46 AM UTC
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