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You look at the world through empty orbs, ignoring the beauty that swells within. Your lips work like anesthesia, numbing your words till they have no meaning. Sometimes I have to wonder, who you really are. If I’d knock on you, and hear an echo, sound bouncing off skin walls. I want to reach down your throat and strike a match. Ignite a fire in your gray soul.  Fill you up with fiery flickering hues. A passion that forces you into motion. Awakening your mind, realizing your truth. A yearning for life beyond just living.
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Apr 23, 2012
Apr 23, 2012 at 3:59 PM UTC
Hollow
You look at the world through empty orbs, ignoring the beauty that swells within. Your lips work like anesthesia, numbing your words till they have no meaning. Sometimes I have to wonder, who you really are. If I’d knock on you, and hear an echo, sound bouncing off skin walls. I want to reach down your throat and strike a match. Ignite a fire in your gray soul.  Fill you up with fiery flickering hues. A passion that forces you into motion. Awakening your mind, realizing your truth. A yearning for life beyond just living.
I actually got inspired to write this by one of those online Title Generators. You know, the ones that you click a button and it gives you a few random titles for poems or stories? I got 'Hollow Comrade' and it inspired me to write this. Of course I took 'Comrade' out of the title because it no longer fit really. Hope you enjoy!
lauren-christina-pearson
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Apr 23, 2012
Apr 23, 2012 at 3:59 PM UTC
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