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You see my petals And yes,they're beautiful. Their scarlet clusters Their succulent aroma Stand out amongst the others My dew dropped leaves Acting as the perfect embellishments As though I wear the rain As a crown. I am a rose, As you can see. But do you not see The dried earth beneath me? Have you not noticed The snakes round my stalk? The shade atop my petals? I am a rose, But I have thorns. You see petals, Breathtaking  petals, I see the improbable, Made possible. I see a rose,dying to live. Dying to survive. It's roots feverishly searching for wet soil In the midst of forgotten dust. You see dew dropped leaves, I see a wall. I see storms brewing Yet the rose Refuses to inhale it's waters And so they sit On her beautifully made petals. You see a red,ravishing rose, I see open scars, For the public's eye. Open,for you. I found those patches of soil I let the rain sit on my petals I bled myself red But didn't you know, You lit my garden? Haven't you noticed, The dew on my leaves, Evaporating? Didn't you realize My red Has slowly began fading? Haven't you noticed The snakes round my stalk And the spiders and the ants Slowly find refuge elsewhere Refuge away from your glare? My love. My world. My life. You see me as the rose, Didn't you know, You are the sun.
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May 9, 2017
May 9, 2017 at 4:54 PM UTC
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You see my petals And yes,they're beautiful. Their scarlet clusters Their succulent aroma Stand out amongst the others My dew dropped leaves Acting as the perfect embellishments As though I wear the rain As a crown. I am a rose, As you can see. But do you not see The dried earth beneath me? Have you not noticed The snakes round my stalk? The shade atop my petals? I am a rose, But I have thorns. You see petals, Breathtaking  petals, I see the improbable, Made possible. I see a rose,dying to live. Dying to survive. It's roots feverishly searching for wet soil In the midst of forgotten dust. You see dew dropped leaves, I see a wall. I see storms brewing Yet the rose Refuses to inhale it's waters And so they sit On her beautifully made petals. You see a red,ravishing rose, I see open scars, For the public's eye. Open,for you. I found those patches of soil I let the rain sit on my petals I bled myself red But didn't you know, You lit my garden? Haven't you noticed, The dew on my leaves, Evaporating? Didn't you realize My red Has slowly began fading? Haven't you noticed The snakes round my stalk And the spiders and the ants Slowly find refuge elsewhere Refuge away from your glare? My love. My world. My life. You see me as the rose, Didn't you know, You are the sun.
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May 9, 2017
May 9, 2017 at 4:54 PM UTC
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