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Harshly I trod upon the ground, Even as I get tired I do not stop, Atypical life I am leading alone, Very lonely I edge towards death, Youth seems to be fading away. Blessings all seem to fade away, Lying on the bed I will take rest, In my usual days I suffer pain, She has given me enough of it, Too much is never a definition, Easy is to bear this pain I invited, Reddish-brown these toes get, Should not be anything else. On my head lingers this probability, None might be with me during my end. May my sufferings end soon, Yes I need help with my state. Toiling hard to lose weight, On a weight loss spree I am, Exhausted is the will to live, So hard I strive to survive. Showering her love she is not anymore, Her healing touch is not here any longer, Owe I do my life to my parents today, Unending ordeal it may seem today, Let some time pass and it may shine, Dub the suffering as another exam. Now I just wish you to shine, oh life, Of light be the torch bearer, oh life, Today I will request you, oh life. Beautifully you can also be bettered, Exploring you I have been always. Do not be so harsh, oh life, I am definitely so tired now, A ray of hope I see in the future, Better be somewhat happier, Especially when I request, Till few days I want to live happily, Eating some good ice-cream, So please let me breathe, oh misery.
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May 1, 2017
May 1, 2017 at 7:55 AM UTC
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Harshly I trod upon the ground, Even as I get tired I do not stop, Atypical life I am leading alone, Very lonely I edge towards death, Youth seems to be fading away. Blessings all seem to fade away, Lying on the bed I will take rest, In my usual days I suffer pain, She has given me enough of it, Too much is never a definition, Easy is to bear this pain I invited, Reddish-brown these toes get, Should not be anything else. On my head lingers this probability, None might be with me during my end. May my sufferings end soon, Yes I need help with my state. Toiling hard to lose weight, On a weight loss spree I am, Exhausted is the will to live, So hard I strive to survive. Showering her love she is not anymore, Her healing touch is not here any longer, Owe I do my life to my parents today, Unending ordeal it may seem today, Let some time pass and it may shine, Dub the suffering as another exam. Now I just wish you to shine, oh life, Of light be the torch bearer, oh life, Today I will request you, oh life. Beautifully you can also be bettered, Exploring you I have been always. Do not be so harsh, oh life, I am definitely so tired now, A ray of hope I see in the future, Better be somewhat happier, Especially when I request, Till few days I want to live happily, Eating some good ice-cream, So please let me breathe, oh misery.
My body is rebelling against me. And I am too young for diabetes. My HP Poem #1518 ©Atul Kaushal
Atul
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35/M/Indian
May 1, 2017
May 1, 2017 at 7:55 AM UTC
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