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January 2002 …surgery Doctor recited some number I didn’t understand what it meant but when he said “not as low as I’d hoped” my heart sank into my gut Later… home with an ugly scar on back of his skull horse shoe shape didn’t the surgeon know horse shoes must hang ends up or the luck in them will escape?
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Apr 29, 2017
Apr 29, 2017 at 2:52 PM UTC
Damocles Part II
January 2002 …surgery Doctor recited some number I didn’t understand what it meant but when he said “not as low as I’d hoped” my heart sank into my gut Later… home with an ugly scar on back of his skull horse shoe shape didn’t the surgeon know horse shoes must hang ends up or the luck in them will escape?
Just this morning I started what will be (if finished) a several-part poem of the saga of our son lost to a brain tumor. When I saw today's "prompt" of "luck" I decided to post Part II. I hope it stands alone well enough.
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Apr 29, 2017
Apr 29, 2017 at 2:52 PM UTC
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