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And so it happened Soul crushing Like a weight of some kind was constantly loaded on you Its asphixiating you But relieving you At the same time And suddenly It seems like youre inside an ocean Thats frozen And all you do Is try so bad To find a way To escape this cage of soul dismantling water And at one point You let go You submerge deeper Much deeper And it feels So light Youre not trying to get out of that frozen ocean anymore Youre just going to stay inside of it And drown With every ****** A deeper realm Awaits you
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Apr 26, 2017
Apr 26, 2017 at 5:58 PM UTC
Hypoxia
And so it happened Soul crushing Like a weight of some kind was constantly loaded on you Its asphixiating you But relieving you At the same time And suddenly It seems like youre inside an ocean Thats frozen And all you do Is try so bad To find a way To escape this cage of soul dismantling water And at one point You let go You submerge deeper Much deeper And it feels So light Youre not trying to get out of that frozen ocean anymore Youre just going to stay inside of it And drown With every ****** A deeper realm Awaits you
sarah-jameel
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24/F/Indian
Apr 26, 2017
Apr 26, 2017 at 5:58 PM UTC
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