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God had Eden Satan had a pleasure park of rollercoasters Pac-Man machines and souvenir shops  (the quests were long  the merchandise over priced the hot dogs cold) and outside Eden  the traffic stretched for miles – cars full of screaming children and half eaten fruit – cars full of fuming parents with half price vouchers stuffed in pockets  others climbed over the fence to the garden of Eden they bought a packed lunch with them a blanket covered in cat hair the garden was overgrown the fruit was rotten dogs ran wild they made a mental note to write a one star review when they got home
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Apr 19, 2017
Apr 19, 2017 at 7:19 AM UTC
eden is ******* (one star review)
God had Eden Satan had a pleasure park of rollercoasters Pac-Man machines and souvenir shops  (the quests were long  the merchandise over priced the hot dogs cold) and outside Eden  the traffic stretched for miles – cars full of screaming children and half eaten fruit – cars full of fuming parents with half price vouchers stuffed in pockets  others climbed over the fence to the garden of Eden they bought a packed lunch with them a blanket covered in cat hair the garden was overgrown the fruit was rotten dogs ran wild they made a mental note to write a one star review when they got home
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Apr 19, 2017
Apr 19, 2017 at 7:19 AM UTC
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