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Convicted and condemned, I hang Upon a cross of wood . With me my co-conspirator And a rabbi, one reputed good. I hear the rabble mocking him; This teacher crowned with thorns. Like me, he struggles for each breath. Like he, he’s suffering and alone. We are naked to the wind There is no dignity in this death For one like me so steeped in sin. I beg a blessing for my soul Before eternity beckons Him He looks at me with kindness then and speaks to me of Paradise. I sense He’s dying as we speak Though I have sinned, he pays my price. I hear him cry out to the sky as he yields his spirit up. The sky grows dark, Golgotha shakes A solider with a stave draws near. Lord I will follow soon enough.
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Apr 17, 2017
Apr 17, 2017 at 8:55 AM UTC
Lessons from a Thief
Convicted and condemned, I hang Upon a cross of wood . With me my co-conspirator And a rabbi, one reputed good. I hear the rabble mocking him; This teacher crowned with thorns. Like me, he struggles for each breath. Like he, he’s suffering and alone. We are naked to the wind There is no dignity in this death For one like me so steeped in sin. I beg a blessing for my soul Before eternity beckons Him He looks at me with kindness then and speaks to me of Paradise. I sense He’s dying as we speak Though I have sinned, he pays my price. I hear him cry out to the sky as he yields his spirit up. The sky grows dark, Golgotha shakes A solider with a stave draws near. Lord I will follow soon enough.
The New Testament story of the good thief
john-f-mccullagh
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63/M/American
Apr 17, 2017
Apr 17, 2017 at 8:55 AM UTC
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