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Forever I'll miss you Through thick and thin How we stayed as a crew You were my twin Assisting each other we climbed and climbed Your charisma keeps lifting me If only I met you earlier in time I would have evolved in glee If only our souls stayed around But alas, our time has come So as you don your gown Our strings of friendship will forever strum
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Apr 16, 2017
Apr 16, 2017 at 8:41 PM UTC
Forever I'll miss you
Forever I'll miss you Through thick and thin How we stayed as a crew You were my twin Assisting each other we climbed and climbed Your charisma keeps lifting me If only I met you earlier in time I would have evolved in glee If only our souls stayed around But alas, our time has come So as you don your gown Our strings of friendship will forever strum
This poem was one that my best friend wrote. This is his first poem so any helpful commentary will be helpful! thanks! M&M
michael-mitchell
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Apr 16, 2017
Apr 16, 2017 at 8:41 PM UTC
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