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. He suspended her from the lowest branch of the tree. Naked and wet. plump-- reddened cheeks from the kiss of the sun. once bitten-- the whole city flipped over -and it snowed... nickles and dimes!
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Feb 18, 2010
Feb 18, 2010 at 10:56 PM UTC
~Naked & Wet ♥
. He suspended her from the lowest branch of the tree. Naked and wet. plump-- reddened cheeks from the kiss of the sun. once bitten-- the whole city flipped over -and it snowed... nickles and dimes!
Someone asked me to tell them what I was thinking when I wrote this. I was thinking about when Eve bit that apple and it flipped the world on it's ear. The poem is actually speaking of inside of a snow globe. The nickles and dimes when the city flipped, come from loose change dropped in the sewers and on the sidewalks.
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Feb 18, 2010
Feb 18, 2010 at 10:56 PM UTC
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