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You well know You left once before Returning with a Tapping knock Upon heart's door Plaintively pleading Can I enter once more To press into your soul Promising a true Forevermore Of only us as one And none other A one to forever remember One of the blissful sublime Not a love to wither and die Shunning wise counsel Reluctantly I granted An entry through Love's window to my soul Yet all again a lie In my agony of sorrow Of a love lost forever Having found my Athena I sip deeply from my glass Nepenthe warm and sweet From behind heart's door Whilst barely breathing Teeth clenching Rage seething Quietly whispering Nevermore, Nevermore ©  2017 Jim Davis Could not resist a steal from Poe! For anyone concerned, this comes from an old personal thing. From Wikipedia on Edgar Allen Poe's poem, "The Raven": ... "Christopher F. S. Maligec suggests the poem is a type of elegiacparaclausithyron, an ancient Greek and Roman poetic form consisting of the lament of an excluded, locked-out lover at the sealed door of his beloved.[14]" Paraclausithyron (Ancient Greek: παρακλαυσίθυρον) is a motif in Greekand especially Augustan love elegy, as well as in troubadour poetry. The details of the Greek etymology are uncertain, but it is generally accepted to mean "lament beside a door", from παρακλαίω, "lament beside", and θύρα, "door".[1] A paraklausithyron typically places a lover outside his mistress's door, desiring entry. In Greek poetry, the situation is connected to the komos, the revels of young people outdoors following intoxication at a symposium. Callimachus uses the situation to reflect on self-control, passion, and free will when the obstacle of the door is removed.[2] From greekgodsandgoddesses website Athena * Athena was the Goddess of War, the female counterpart of ARES. * She was the daughter of Zeus; no mother bore her. She sprang from Zeus’s head, full-grown and clothed in armor. ....... * In later poetry, Athena embodied wisdom and rational thought. From Dictionary website Nepenthe * a drug or drink, or the plant yielding it, mentioned by ancient writers as having the power to bring forgetfulness of sorrow or trouble. * anything inducing a pleasurable sensation of forgetfulness, esp. of sorrow or trouble.
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Apr 13, 2017
Apr 13, 2017 at 10:30 AM UTC
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You well know You left once before Returning with a Tapping knock Upon heart's door Plaintively pleading Can I enter once more To press into your soul Promising a true Forevermore Of only us as one And none other A one to forever remember One of the blissful sublime Not a love to wither and die Shunning wise counsel Reluctantly I granted An entry through Love's window to my soul Yet all again a lie In my agony of sorrow Of a love lost forever Having found my Athena I sip deeply from my glass Nepenthe warm and sweet From behind heart's door Whilst barely breathing Teeth clenching Rage seething Quietly whispering Nevermore, Nevermore ©  2017 Jim Davis Could not resist a steal from Poe! For anyone concerned, this comes from an old personal thing. From Wikipedia on Edgar Allen Poe's poem, "The Raven": ... "Christopher F. S. Maligec suggests the poem is a type of elegiacparaclausithyron, an ancient Greek and Roman poetic form consisting of the lament of an excluded, locked-out lover at the sealed door of his beloved.[14]" Paraclausithyron (Ancient Greek: παρακλαυσίθυρον) is a motif in Greekand especially Augustan love elegy, as well as in troubadour poetry. The details of the Greek etymology are uncertain, but it is generally accepted to mean "lament beside a door", from παρακλαίω, "lament beside", and θύρα, "door".[1] A paraklausithyron typically places a lover outside his mistress's door, desiring entry. In Greek poetry, the situation is connected to the komos, the revels of young people outdoors following intoxication at a symposium. Callimachus uses the situation to reflect on self-control, passion, and free will when the obstacle of the door is removed.[2] From greekgodsandgoddesses website Athena * Athena was the Goddess of War, the female counterpart of ARES. * She was the daughter of Zeus; no mother bore her. She sprang from Zeus’s head, full-grown and clothed in armor. ....... * In later poetry, Athena embodied wisdom and rational thought. From Dictionary website Nepenthe * a drug or drink, or the plant yielding it, mentioned by ancient writers as having the power to bring forgetfulness of sorrow or trouble. * anything inducing a pleasurable sensation of forgetfulness, esp. of sorrow or trouble.
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