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On Turning Sixty-One Fitzgerald’s last line; longing, lovingly rendered in fourteen words, ode to inevitability in any tongue. “So we beat on”, aching, “boats against the current”, our urgent she bu de!, she bu de!/ I can’t bear to let go!, “borne back” on music in the Latin, de mihi tempus/ give me more time. Songs echo “ceaselessly into the past.”
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Apr 3, 2017
Apr 3, 2017 at 7:16 AM UTC
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On Turning Sixty-One Fitzgerald’s last line; longing, lovingly rendered in fourteen words, ode to inevitability in any tongue. “So we beat on”, aching, “boats against the current”, our urgent she bu de!, she bu de!/ I can’t bear to let go!, “borne back” on music in the Latin, de mihi tempus/ give me more time. Songs echo “ceaselessly into the past.”
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Apr 3, 2017
Apr 3, 2017 at 7:16 AM UTC
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