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Brisk footsteps clank on the cold floor, Likewise it was a cold evening the hollow air echoed the silence that fell after each footstep. This was the walk of a dead man, And the chilly twilight wind only whispered lies as the man trekked onward. He had been gone. Disappeared. His magic trick had prevailed. For three years he fooled the people of the world, For three years he fooled his one and only true friend. As he walked, his footsteps echoed words of the game. A game he had not wanted to play. Unwillingly, he had fallen. An expression of pain crept its way onto the man's face as he walked, pace lessened under the weight of the words. The words, swelling up in his mind. Twisting, hissing, taunting and haunting him. Annoying, psychopath, show off, misanthrope, arrogant, ignorant, ***** abnormal, inhuman, machine, fake, fraud. Fraud. The irony laughed at his side as he mouthed the word again: F r a u d Noun. deceit, trickery, sharp practice, or breach of confidence, perpetrated for profit or to gain some unfair or dishonest advantage. Indeed he had been tricked, what a wonderful trap. A trap only he could have over looked. It was all so well planned out, his final problem. Final words. Wrapping a lie in a blanket of truth, it was the only thing that could[had] stopped him- The most human, human being- Reality struck him as his feet came to a halt, the man's gaze drifted upward, shifting into a familiar glance. The wind no longer wished to whisper lies, and the silence that followed him would break with the final echoes of his footsteps: Home.
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Apr 10, 2012
Apr 10, 2012 at 12:36 AM UTC
The Return
Brisk footsteps clank on the cold floor, Likewise it was a cold evening the hollow air echoed the silence that fell after each footstep. This was the walk of a dead man, And the chilly twilight wind only whispered lies as the man trekked onward. He had been gone. Disappeared. His magic trick had prevailed. For three years he fooled the people of the world, For three years he fooled his one and only true friend. As he walked, his footsteps echoed words of the game. A game he had not wanted to play. Unwillingly, he had fallen. An expression of pain crept its way onto the man's face as he walked, pace lessened under the weight of the words. The words, swelling up in his mind. Twisting, hissing, taunting and haunting him. Annoying, psychopath, show off, misanthrope, arrogant, ignorant, ***** abnormal, inhuman, machine, fake, fraud. Fraud. The irony laughed at his side as he mouthed the word again: F r a u d Noun. deceit, trickery, sharp practice, or breach of confidence, perpetrated for profit or to gain some unfair or dishonest advantage. Indeed he had been tricked, what a wonderful trap. A trap only he could have over looked. It was all so well planned out, his final problem. Final words. Wrapping a lie in a blanket of truth, it was the only thing that could[had] stopped him- The most human, human being- Reality struck him as his feet came to a halt, the man's gaze drifted upward, shifting into a familiar glance. The wind no longer wished to whisper lies, and the silence that followed him would break with the final echoes of his footsteps: Home.
A poem is never finished-- an idea that my TOK teacher loves to stress. So here, Mr. Rees is my never-to-be-finished finished poem.
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Apr 10, 2012
Apr 10, 2012 at 12:36 AM UTC
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