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We built a beautiful relationship together sturdy and effective but also appealing and bright You watched the relationship you had modeled ours after crumble to the ground and all the flaws revealed We had both seen this before but it was different this time Maybe because our relationship looked like theirs once had But what we could have never seen was all the cracks in their foundation All the problems they hid in the basement relationships don't crumble in a day they slowly erode away each crack left unfilled takes away the stability a little more the rusted out center of your parents relationship left only an outside shell a gust away from complete destruction The outside doesn't matter we aren't doomed for the same fate just because we used the same bricks its the upkeep that matters To have a good relationship you have to fill those cracks You have to work to make things stable they don't always come naturally but the results of working together are incredible
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Mar 20, 2017
Mar 20, 2017 at 2:36 PM UTC
A Windy Day
We built a beautiful relationship together sturdy and effective but also appealing and bright You watched the relationship you had modeled ours after crumble to the ground and all the flaws revealed We had both seen this before but it was different this time Maybe because our relationship looked like theirs once had But what we could have never seen was all the cracks in their foundation All the problems they hid in the basement relationships don't crumble in a day they slowly erode away each crack left unfilled takes away the stability a little more the rusted out center of your parents relationship left only an outside shell a gust away from complete destruction The outside doesn't matter we aren't doomed for the same fate just because we used the same bricks its the upkeep that matters To have a good relationship you have to fill those cracks You have to work to make things stable they don't always come naturally but the results of working together are incredible
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Mar 20, 2017
Mar 20, 2017 at 2:36 PM UTC
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