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my sorrow like the ocean fills my world i can’t see anything but blue my favorite color now my enemy led by fate slowly sinking falling help i scream no one’s around i fall endlessly grasping at sunlight beautiful gold mixing with ribbons of blue i could fall let go but more is worth a moment of pain so i claw back up im burning on fire smoky black surrounds me but i survive the blue may be back pushing me down once again but it’s ok i am stronger than it knows this time i will find my way to the surface and onto the shore for i am stronger than my sorrow
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Mar 18, 2017
Mar 18, 2017 at 11:39 PM UTC
sorrow
my sorrow like the ocean fills my world i can’t see anything but blue my favorite color now my enemy led by fate slowly sinking falling help i scream no one’s around i fall endlessly grasping at sunlight beautiful gold mixing with ribbons of blue i could fall let go but more is worth a moment of pain so i claw back up im burning on fire smoky black surrounds me but i survive the blue may be back pushing me down once again but it’s ok i am stronger than it knows this time i will find my way to the surface and onto the shore for i am stronger than my sorrow
This is my first poem. How is it?
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Mar 18, 2017
Mar 18, 2017 at 11:39 PM UTC
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