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winter sky the passing road, unshaded--up lids falling
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Mar 10, 2017
Mar 10, 2017 at 11:54 PM UTC
haiku no. 69
winter sky the passing road, unshaded--up lids falling
My attempt at Sabi. Its definition here: an understatement hinting at great depths.
christian-l-bixler
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Mar 10, 2017
Mar 10, 2017 at 11:54 PM UTC
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