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I looked beyond the crescent moon; As they went out to slumber with trees. It was a night, some night in June; It still paints a vivid illusion of the memory. It was a time, A time where we were young and carefree. *Maybe at that time, I was the one who could actually see.* We danced some tune; The trees were at it too. We burned brighter than the fire And of that he knew. The stars were smiling, The winds were singing and crying; Everything I felt was so anew. We were there dancing or sitting or laughing; Anything but frowning, This was a world, A world in which it was new. *I remember.. I could hear my heart beating; I could hear everyone’s heart. I never felt more connected; More whole. 'This was nature'* I looked out the bus window; At the varied morning colors the sky painted to me. 'Cause maybe at that time.. I was the only one who could see.
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Mar 10, 2017
Mar 10, 2017 at 11:05 AM UTC
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I looked beyond the crescent moon; As they went out to slumber with trees. It was a night, some night in June; It still paints a vivid illusion of the memory. It was a time, A time where we were young and carefree. *Maybe at that time, I was the one who could actually see.* We danced some tune; The trees were at it too. We burned brighter than the fire And of that he knew. The stars were smiling, The winds were singing and crying; Everything I felt was so anew. We were there dancing or sitting or laughing; Anything but frowning, This was a world, A world in which it was new. *I remember.. I could hear my heart beating; I could hear everyone’s heart. I never felt more connected; More whole. 'This was nature'* I looked out the bus window; At the varied morning colors the sky painted to me. 'Cause maybe at that time.. I was the only one who could see.
Thought it'll be great to share this poem with y'all since this was the poem I submitted to a school contest & won! :)) Please enjoy cx
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Mar 10, 2017
Mar 10, 2017 at 11:05 AM UTC
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