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In the bottom of the subway mouth foamed in summer sweat and the ink of rodents on chipped slate tunnels, in the breath of the compassionless lick of dirt swabs, of empty swayings, murmurings, square eyes, and slit mouths, where a trembling roar like an elsewhere lion is an unfortunate savior, I saw in front of me a real dream, just barely (and perhaps not)—but in one of its moments, I did feel cracked—felt the sudden unbelievable shockwave of shattered skull heat, white, blinding, a quick wisp of eternal time, before back, to the undream of dreams. This real. Laughable and despairable. Of hot waiting, dying lassitude. Before going on cramped with the others. Nowhere.
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Mar 27, 2012
Mar 27, 2012 at 5:28 PM UTC
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In the bottom of the subway mouth foamed in summer sweat and the ink of rodents on chipped slate tunnels, in the breath of the compassionless lick of dirt swabs, of empty swayings, murmurings, square eyes, and slit mouths, where a trembling roar like an elsewhere lion is an unfortunate savior, I saw in front of me a real dream, just barely (and perhaps not)—but in one of its moments, I did feel cracked—felt the sudden unbelievable shockwave of shattered skull heat, white, blinding, a quick wisp of eternal time, before back, to the undream of dreams. This real. Laughable and despairable. Of hot waiting, dying lassitude. Before going on cramped with the others. Nowhere.
daniello
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Mar 27, 2012
Mar 27, 2012 at 5:28 PM UTC
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