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I've noticed I've been looking up a lot Realized that it is pride, and though it is pride I wish it were paradigm I was never really able to look up again after the first time i looked down on you, or on optimism For favoring belief in myself, and realism
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Mar 27, 2012
Mar 27, 2012 at 2:56 PM UTC
Pride and Paradigm
I've noticed I've been looking up a lot Realized that it is pride, and though it is pride I wish it were paradigm I was never really able to look up again after the first time i looked down on you, or on optimism For favoring belief in myself, and realism
I'm hoping this is as effective as it feels. My attempt at for once writing rhymeless.
LuminUmbra
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Mar 27, 2012
Mar 27, 2012 at 2:56 PM UTC
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