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At dawn on my twenty fifth birthday 416 pilot whales beached themselves, in the shallow tides at Farewell Spit. I woke to rain on the wooden roof of my new flat and confused myself in unfamiliar blankets and the words of your message, written heartfelt and wobbly in the early hours before morning, caught in the marine ebb and flow, that stranded us too.
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Feb 10, 2017
Feb 10, 2017 at 5:06 AM UTC
Whale stranding.
At dawn on my twenty fifth birthday 416 pilot whales beached themselves, in the shallow tides at Farewell Spit. I woke to rain on the wooden roof of my new flat and confused myself in unfamiliar blankets and the words of your message, written heartfelt and wobbly in the early hours before morning, caught in the marine ebb and flow, that stranded us too.
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Feb 10, 2017
Feb 10, 2017 at 5:06 AM UTC
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