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Don't be surprised when you go to the shop and you see a familiar blue guitar, acoustic and barely used. There is a reason that guitar is barely used. There was a girl who had far too many dreams to come true of being a rock star folk star pop star anything star. She learned and practiced, but what always told her playing and singing just wasn't good enough. She ****** she sounded like **** and she would never beat a child at the activity of playing guitar, writing songs, and singing. She would bring it to parties, everyone would get up and get a drink as she played a song. She would write a song, people would laugh at her. She would sing an old tune and play the chords, people would criticize her. She got the bravery to play on the grass ground on her campus but people walking by and drifting away was a sing of rejection. She fought hard to still play and not be an expert, but she lost every ******* battle and war. There were very few who appreciated, but who knows if the blue guitar, Luna, is worth keeping. She was too much of a nervous wreck to play in front of anyone, sometimes she did, it went well, and she was told it was beautiful. Luna might have to go in the shop and be sold to someone who is BETTER and EXPERIENCED and for christ's sake, GOOD AND TALENTED. That girl, Me, has talent that is BARELY USED because I am not good, never was, and I JUST CANT TAKE ANYMORE CRITICISM! If someone doesn't like you talent, it is not a crime. If you play and sound like **** it is considered a crime, but by who? I know there is room to grow but I just can't fit anymore time. I might sell my guitar, if/when I do, she will be shiny and blue, in good condition, and most of all, barely used. I'm just placating to anyone who laughed, criticized, or silently booed. You're welcome.
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Feb 7, 2017
Feb 7, 2017 at 8:28 PM UTC
Barely Used
Don't be surprised when you go to the shop and you see a familiar blue guitar, acoustic and barely used. There is a reason that guitar is barely used. There was a girl who had far too many dreams to come true of being a rock star folk star pop star anything star. She learned and practiced, but what always told her playing and singing just wasn't good enough. She ****** she sounded like **** and she would never beat a child at the activity of playing guitar, writing songs, and singing. She would bring it to parties, everyone would get up and get a drink as she played a song. She would write a song, people would laugh at her. She would sing an old tune and play the chords, people would criticize her. She got the bravery to play on the grass ground on her campus but people walking by and drifting away was a sing of rejection. She fought hard to still play and not be an expert, but she lost every ******* battle and war. There were very few who appreciated, but who knows if the blue guitar, Luna, is worth keeping. She was too much of a nervous wreck to play in front of anyone, sometimes she did, it went well, and she was told it was beautiful. Luna might have to go in the shop and be sold to someone who is BETTER and EXPERIENCED and for christ's sake, GOOD AND TALENTED. That girl, Me, has talent that is BARELY USED because I am not good, never was, and I JUST CANT TAKE ANYMORE CRITICISM! If someone doesn't like you talent, it is not a crime. If you play and sound like **** it is considered a crime, but by who? I know there is room to grow but I just can't fit anymore time. I might sell my guitar, if/when I do, she will be shiny and blue, in good condition, and most of all, barely used. I'm just placating to anyone who laughed, criticized, or silently booed. You're welcome.
I might sell my guitar. I keep losing interest, motivation, and I never had skill anyway. I'm on the fence, chances are I won't sell it, but I **** no matter what I do different. Nobody likes hearing me play in my house, so I might as well quit.
LunaCasablanca
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Feb 7, 2017
Feb 7, 2017 at 8:28 PM UTC
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