Summer's lake now solid and cold
June's leaves now old and dry
As gray streams pass through frigid sky
Birds should fly for tropics
here in wind hold tight to their sticks
but birdy's trick can pay
with sun on wing that first spring day
Feb 5, 2017
Feb 5, 2017 at 6:41 PM UTC
Summer's lake now solid and cold
June's leaves now old and dry
As gray streams pass through frigid sky
Birds should fly for tropics
here in wind hold tight to their sticks
but birdy's trick can pay
with sun on wing that first spring day
My first attempt at a Luc Bat poem. Luc Bat is a Vietnamese form. For information on the form, follow this link. http://www.writersdigest.com/whats-new/luc-bat-poems-poetic-form
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