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blurry image, out of focus closing in on hopeless notice broken glow, prone to coldness holding on to low the closest lambent lacking, saddened blackness lasting facts of tragic practice shattered glass, facet blasted passing granted hands the fastest
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Jan 7, 2017
Jan 7, 2017 at 7:46 PM UTC
stained glass - 8-8-7-8 syllable rhyme scheme
blurry image, out of focus closing in on hopeless notice broken glow, prone to coldness holding on to low the closest lambent lacking, saddened blackness lasting facts of tragic practice shattered glass, facet blasted passing granted hands the fastest
No more passive-aggressive comments and messages. I do my own thang, and I don't know a lot about poetry rules.
GaryL
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Jan 7, 2017
Jan 7, 2017 at 7:46 PM UTC
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