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rocking the metal pan side to side, agitate the sand so swirling   water lets gravity push the worthless sediment over the edges into the pool gravel-dust gathers momentum swarming in a circular current allowing the golden nuggets to sink to the base fingers as feet through quicksand explore the grey salt-swamp cold makes them slow and dumb soft skin complains as grains scratch skin a thousand times toy fingernails clawing catch a lump, hold it between thumb and finger, bulge with fulfilment as your gobbet glints beneath its caked mud set the pan upon rocks clasping tightly, pull the stone through the pool, freeing it from the clinging dust    release it from the depths of the crocodile water and the ugly mound of chalky mud submerged will be caterpillar to butterfly, a solid gold nugget lying fat on the face of your soggy outstretched palm.
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Mar 19, 2012
Mar 19, 2012 at 9:29 AM UTC
gold-panning
rocking the metal pan side to side, agitate the sand so swirling   water lets gravity push the worthless sediment over the edges into the pool gravel-dust gathers momentum swarming in a circular current allowing the golden nuggets to sink to the base fingers as feet through quicksand explore the grey salt-swamp cold makes them slow and dumb soft skin complains as grains scratch skin a thousand times toy fingernails clawing catch a lump, hold it between thumb and finger, bulge with fulfilment as your gobbet glints beneath its caked mud set the pan upon rocks clasping tightly, pull the stone through the pool, freeing it from the clinging dust    release it from the depths of the crocodile water and the ugly mound of chalky mud submerged will be caterpillar to butterfly, a solid gold nugget lying fat on the face of your soggy outstretched palm.
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Mar 19, 2012
Mar 19, 2012 at 9:29 AM UTC
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