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Nima is sitting waiting for you in the corridor of the hospital. You see her there in her dressing gown and her hair tied in a ponytail. She has her arms folded, and a dull look about her. Thought you weren't coming, she says. Train was delayed, you reply. Let's go sit outside in her grounds, she says. So you follow her out through French windows onto the grass and sit on a bench. How comes you're in your dressing gown? You say. They're worried I might try to escape, so I have to wear my dressing gown and nightie, she says. Why might you escape? you ask. Mother told them she told them I might get out for a fix. You nod your head: and would you? Possibly, she says, looking at you: got a smoke? You get out a packet and light one for both of you and you sit there smoking so what's been happening? You ask. Mother came and we had a row and she told them I might escape to London for a fix and they believe her, Nima says moodily; she inhales deeply you? What you been doing? You look past her at other patients walking on the grass: work making tools mainly, listen to jazz, you know usual, you say, too late to come see you here. Guess so, but I miss you Benny; each time I pass that small cupboard I think of us having that quickie there remember? Yes, you say smiling. They keep it locked now, Nima says, typical bad luck; what a life, no you, no ****
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Dec 22, 2016
Dec 22, 2016 at 2:52 AM UTC
BENNY'S VISIT 1967.
Nima is sitting waiting for you in the corridor of the hospital. You see her there in her dressing gown and her hair tied in a ponytail. She has her arms folded, and a dull look about her. Thought you weren't coming, she says. Train was delayed, you reply. Let's go sit outside in her grounds, she says. So you follow her out through French windows onto the grass and sit on a bench. How comes you're in your dressing gown? You say. They're worried I might try to escape, so I have to wear my dressing gown and nightie, she says. Why might you escape? you ask. Mother told them she told them I might get out for a fix. You nod your head: and would you? Possibly, she says, looking at you: got a smoke? You get out a packet and light one for both of you and you sit there smoking so what's been happening? You ask. Mother came and we had a row and she told them I might escape to London for a fix and they believe her, Nima says moodily; she inhales deeply you? What you been doing? You look past her at other patients walking on the grass: work making tools mainly, listen to jazz, you know usual, you say, too late to come see you here. Guess so, but I miss you Benny; each time I pass that small cupboard I think of us having that quickie there remember? Yes, you say smiling. They keep it locked now, Nima says, typical bad luck; what a life, no you, no ****
A YOUNG MAN VISITS HIS GIRLFRIEND IN A PSYCHIATRIC HOSPITAL IN 1967
TerryCollett
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Dec 22, 2016
Dec 22, 2016 at 2:52 AM UTC
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