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Who The Hell Is Reading Me? (a first draft, pre-sleep whimsy) Who the hell is reading me? Occasionally, I see one, two, three - It’s rough, And certainly is not enough! I usually do not complain, But fellow poets, you know It’s the damn-dest pain To work for hours, - sometimes days Refining, re- re- re-ing phrase And syntax, Checking idioms and facts To get across idea and spirit. Are you with it, reader friend? No trend, no agent/publicist to wave a wand, No publisher to send you huge advances Because he’s of the sole conviction of your chances. [Do you], get my drift? Shifting in your seats, Because you recognize the whiney bleats That you would like to scream out too? Well, ***** the reading force, That leading farce that forces us To sit it out in silent grumble, Mortifyingly discomfited and humble. But know what mate? I love it! Never sated, secretly, I love it! As my confidante, I tell you this. I wouldn’t miss this silliness For all the tea in China! I don’t have to be a winner Eating Nobel Prizes for my dinner, Nah, I’m happy just to do What you do - writing for the one or two, (there used to be three – one has split) Get the isolated compliment From someone honored – or not. (everyone’s got their own way of seeing things). Not trying in the least, to be convincing, Cheerio, to you who may be just my opposite; And good, good, good, good, good goodnight! Who The Hell Is Reading Me12.19.2016 A Sense of The Ridiculous; Defiant Doggerel; Arlene Corwin
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Dec 20, 2016
Dec 20, 2016 at 7:52 PM UTC
Who The Hell Is Rading Me (revised the very next day)
Who The Hell Is Reading Me? (a first draft, pre-sleep whimsy) Who the hell is reading me? Occasionally, I see one, two, three - It’s rough, And certainly is not enough! I usually do not complain, But fellow poets, you know It’s the damn-dest pain To work for hours, - sometimes days Refining, re- re- re-ing phrase And syntax, Checking idioms and facts To get across idea and spirit. Are you with it, reader friend? No trend, no agent/publicist to wave a wand, No publisher to send you huge advances Because he’s of the sole conviction of your chances. [Do you], get my drift? Shifting in your seats, Because you recognize the whiney bleats That you would like to scream out too? Well, ***** the reading force, That leading farce that forces us To sit it out in silent grumble, Mortifyingly discomfited and humble. But know what mate? I love it! Never sated, secretly, I love it! As my confidante, I tell you this. I wouldn’t miss this silliness For all the tea in China! I don’t have to be a winner Eating Nobel Prizes for my dinner, Nah, I’m happy just to do What you do - writing for the one or two, (there used to be three – one has split) Get the isolated compliment From someone honored – or not. (everyone’s got their own way of seeing things). Not trying in the least, to be convincing, Cheerio, to you who may be just my opposite; And good, good, good, good, good goodnight! Who The Hell Is Reading Me12.19.2016 A Sense of The Ridiculous; Defiant Doggerel; Arlene Corwin
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Dec 20, 2016
Dec 20, 2016 at 7:52 PM UTC
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