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Packing our bags, as if never coming back, to never look back at these baggy bags. These baggy bags, have you and me. Memories, now they flee, with the bagginess these bags. The park swing still swings, as if it never missed our bubbling nor the crazy chattering, on that swing we used to swing. Eccentric we were, in terms of termly terms like love,we had to squirm and worm to who we were. The park swing had bid adieu long ago, but these baggy bags, memory and love it drags; these baggy bags don't flow with the foe. These baggy bags, packed bags,they sack nothing but love and faith- that, we once had.
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Dec 17, 2016
Dec 17, 2016 at 10:36 AM UTC
Baggy bags..
Packing our bags, as if never coming back, to never look back at these baggy bags. These baggy bags, have you and me. Memories, now they flee, with the bagginess these bags. The park swing still swings, as if it never missed our bubbling nor the crazy chattering, on that swing we used to swing. Eccentric we were, in terms of termly terms like love,we had to squirm and worm to who we were. The park swing had bid adieu long ago, but these baggy bags, memory and love it drags; these baggy bags don't flow with the foe. These baggy bags, packed bags,they sack nothing but love and faith- that, we once had.
The title -'baggy bags' doesn't make any sense but, what do you think?
SusanJacob
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Dec 17, 2016
Dec 17, 2016 at 10:36 AM UTC
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