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as one stage empties slow shuffle exit another curtain will rise waiting for that spark an instant in time silent explosion within stylus on rock face outline of past forms a mountain's sudden call as eagle marks still moments above a darkened gorge brooding dawn fights clouds' urgent cries and man's spirit lifts high and at last flies free - - - - - -
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Dec 2, 2016
Dec 2, 2016 at 2:42 PM UTC
- - - fly free - - -
as one stage empties slow shuffle exit another curtain will rise waiting for that spark an instant in time silent explosion within stylus on rock face outline of past forms a mountain's sudden call as eagle marks still moments above a darkened gorge brooding dawn fights clouds' urgent cries and man's spirit lifts high and at last flies free - - - - - -
Sometimes poems don't easily flow for a time.  Perhaps we are trying to have each one just perfect. This off the cuff poem arose spontaneously and is dedicated to Kamala  from poetfreak.com (ending 31/12/16) who has wonderful talent.  This is my welcome poem to him if he finds his way here: Take care - you are a brilliant poet - it sits there waiting for that spark - a turn of the head, a cloud formation, a child's sudden laugh on distant wind, the roar of a river... an eagle soaring steady, ominous, yet beautiful - as a sullen dawn over a brooding sea - ah! I feel it stir in you - it is there... for you are a true poet, my friend, so let it fly free...! I found this pic on Flickr to accompany this post - it's worth viewing: https://www.flickr.com/photos/visbeek/4079078904/in/photolist-GGYAEj-zPqzkH-C6vKbQ-tUkRHr-tBTyRn-tBTyre-u5ffKz-sXjLhh-7dsm3C-nNmfSZ-5XmwwH-nJcEhR-GRkyQQ-rAKyje-6hfKbn-9RWR7c-aZugaB-cYE9bm-96nk4X-5TS2fP-tUtcM6-s51CHE-tpkJAo-tvC4gD-uvYmuC-xQijbn-tLgSWL-syvu
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Dec 2, 2016
Dec 2, 2016 at 2:42 PM UTC
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