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Slumped on an old pink couch, television test pattern flickering off their biscotti painted walls,  Pall Mall smoldering on the rug beneath Jack’s fingers, Lorene mostly dead, Jack might as well be;  early a.m., dark.
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Nov 1, 2016
Nov 1, 2016 at 8:06 AM UTC
Jack & Lorene
Slumped on an old pink couch, television test pattern flickering off their biscotti painted walls,  Pall Mall smoldering on the rug beneath Jack’s fingers, Lorene mostly dead, Jack might as well be;  early a.m., dark.
doug-potter
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Nov 1, 2016
Nov 1, 2016 at 8:06 AM UTC
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