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I was captivated, Mesmerized by her beauty on this Bronx bound 5 train. I drowned in her green eyes and did not care to breathe. Her ***** blonde, bordering brunette hair waved perfectly. Everything about her was beautiful. To say I was nervous would be an understatement. I didn't dare to tell her how radiant she looked. Another missed connection on a subway line heading uptown. Hopefully I will see her at Wall Street again. It isn't likely, but I would like to redeem myself. Or at least say , "Good morning."
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Oct 31, 2016
Oct 31, 2016 at 8:54 PM UTC
Bronx Bound, Uptown.
I was captivated, Mesmerized by her beauty on this Bronx bound 5 train. I drowned in her green eyes and did not care to breathe. Her ***** blonde, bordering brunette hair waved perfectly. Everything about her was beautiful. To say I was nervous would be an understatement. I didn't dare to tell her how radiant she looked. Another missed connection on a subway line heading uptown. Hopefully I will see her at Wall Street again. It isn't likely, but I would like to redeem myself. Or at least say , "Good morning."
Another one about Kim, the girl I would see on my way to work.
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Oct 31, 2016
Oct 31, 2016 at 8:54 PM UTC
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