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Unawares time passes rivers flow the heart beats on its continuous mission we live a life not knowing the end not knowing what impact we will make on it on others on ourselves on the environment hoping it will be well spent helping others to live theirs only totally aware part of the time the rest is carried out by the automatic functions of the brain subconsciously we lean on the walls of reality some support us some fall as we touch them it is all trial and error try once and evaluate to judge this existence is not possible only partially aware of it we surmise its quality equate its harmony and finally fall into the bliss of oblivion none the wiser for having lived Margaret Ann Waddicor 8th April 2016
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Oct 28, 2016
Oct 28, 2016 at 7:51 AM UTC
This Life its Silent Passage
Unawares time passes rivers flow the heart beats on its continuous mission we live a life not knowing the end not knowing what impact we will make on it on others on ourselves on the environment hoping it will be well spent helping others to live theirs only totally aware part of the time the rest is carried out by the automatic functions of the brain subconsciously we lean on the walls of reality some support us some fall as we touch them it is all trial and error try once and evaluate to judge this existence is not possible only partially aware of it we surmise its quality equate its harmony and finally fall into the bliss of oblivion none the wiser for having lived Margaret Ann Waddicor 8th April 2016
I used this in a comment to Hoelbling's poem.
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Oct 28, 2016 at 7:51 AM UTC
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