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when no objective is best for our protection protecting ourselves would be the best direction directing ourselves toward a progressive connection connecting our minds to make a collective correction correcting the obsessions that infect our perception perceiving ourselves as the essence of conception conceiving a brand new perspective of reception receiving the blessing that we call perfection
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Oct 22, 2016
Oct 22, 2016 at 7:00 PM UTC
a collective perfection - double quantum loop poem
when no objective is best for our protection protecting ourselves would be the best direction directing ourselves toward a progressive connection connecting our minds to make a collective correction correcting the obsessions that infect our perception perceiving ourselves as the essence of conception conceiving a brand new perspective of reception receiving the blessing that we call perfection
In a Quantum Loop poem, the last line of each stanza must be used as a different form of the word, as the first word in the following line. It also must rhyme, or nearly rhyme. Rhyme scheme can be any way you want it though. In a double quantum loop poem, the first word in lines 2, 3, and 4 must rhyme.
GaryL
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54/M/American
Oct 22, 2016
Oct 22, 2016 at 7:00 PM UTC
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