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For your response, fellow writers on H.P., To my Attempts At painting With Words Which I know are, to me, Inadequate. Why? Well, like, Socrates , hailed as a wise man, told you all HE new nothing. I Know There is more I can do to get it right. BUT ,Right, in accordance to what and who? The RIght/Write Is YOU!...And, acknowledging The CREATOR and CHRIST. I Have faults amany, Like Everyone... I Am like YOU But are ME Struggling Like CHRIST Trying to be nice Preventing a Nuclear Holocaust To say Simply I LOve You From the bottom of MY heart. I Can go on forever with my rant (while pulsating one should!) There Is so much more I want to express And Will If GOD respires.
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Oct 16, 2016
Oct 16, 2016 at 6:59 PM UTC
Thank You!
For your response, fellow writers on H.P., To my Attempts At painting With Words Which I know are, to me, Inadequate. Why? Well, like, Socrates , hailed as a wise man, told you all HE new nothing. I Know There is more I can do to get it right. BUT ,Right, in accordance to what and who? The RIght/Write Is YOU!...And, acknowledging The CREATOR and CHRIST. I Have faults amany, Like Everyone... I Am like YOU But are ME Struggling Like CHRIST Trying to be nice Preventing a Nuclear Holocaust To say Simply I LOve You From the bottom of MY heart. I Can go on forever with my rant (while pulsating one should!) There Is so much more I want to express And Will If GOD respires.
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Oct 16, 2016
Oct 16, 2016 at 6:59 PM UTC
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