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No matter what our races were... Over four score and seven years ago We the people of the United States of America Had pledged our allegiance And written our John Hancocks For the country that we love It gives me life, liberty, and happiness But after all, a little rebellion now and then is a good thing And I have a dream That it will get even better For all men are created equal
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Oct 10, 2016
Oct 10, 2016 at 10:03 PM UTC
The Segregated Seperation of American Quotes
No matter what our races were... Over four score and seven years ago We the people of the United States of America Had pledged our allegiance And written our John Hancocks For the country that we love It gives me life, liberty, and happiness But after all, a little rebellion now and then is a good thing And I have a dream That it will get even better For all men are created equal
This poem was made in a specific way. In the second stanza, every line is made up of a famous White American quote. These were put first to show the superiority of whites in many people's eyes. Then in the third stanza, I put the famous African American quote, "I have a dream" showing what is to come for other races. I finish the poem with "all men are created equal," a famous white patriot quote that also shows white support for the idea of the equality. I have disregarded the final line's original historical intention and that it was directed for only white men. This poem might express some argument but I want to express what I feel. After all, poetry is expression of emotion. :-)
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Oct 10, 2016
Oct 10, 2016 at 10:03 PM UTC
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