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Last night as I sat in the ancient temple atop the mountain, my people surrounding            me, generations upon generations,   voices ascending        in the wispy and             earthbound solidarity                  of ancient prayers, I felt the words                rise up around me, protecting, loving their intonations            tingling inside the doorways          of my brain expanding the limits through glass and sacred ceilings,        up unto the stars celestial understandings pushing through my crumbling walls to break through barriers          from the thickness of night reaching out       into purity, a beckoning              of light and the words, the singsong tones passed down from the ancients     like candlelit incantations          grew soft, invisible wings                  that touched my cheek                    the silky presence of                the grounded power                          of my ancestors welling up in the          dark caverns within and as we sang of new beginnings          and listened with one heart to the call of the shofar,         that ram's horn of blessings,                             my knotted loops of longing resonated in musical notes strands of the primordial                in the deep forest echoes              of my being linking my soul's cry to all the people            of my book in a long swirling line               down to the river, the desert, the oceans a tight braided chord of solidarity, of lineage, of blood the flesh and bones of heritage pumping crimson freedom Yes, somewhere,           in even the most                 broken chords                    of heartstrings                 tiny wings beat                             hope
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Oct 4, 2016
Oct 4, 2016 at 3:35 AM UTC
Tiny Wings (in heartstrings)
Last night as I sat in the ancient temple atop the mountain, my people surrounding            me, generations upon generations,   voices ascending        in the wispy and             earthbound solidarity                  of ancient prayers, I felt the words                rise up around me, protecting, loving their intonations            tingling inside the doorways          of my brain expanding the limits through glass and sacred ceilings,        up unto the stars celestial understandings pushing through my crumbling walls to break through barriers          from the thickness of night reaching out       into purity, a beckoning              of light and the words, the singsong tones passed down from the ancients     like candlelit incantations          grew soft, invisible wings                  that touched my cheek                    the silky presence of                the grounded power                          of my ancestors welling up in the          dark caverns within and as we sang of new beginnings          and listened with one heart to the call of the shofar,         that ram's horn of blessings,                             my knotted loops of longing resonated in musical notes strands of the primordial                in the deep forest echoes              of my being linking my soul's cry to all the people            of my book in a long swirling line               down to the river, the desert, the oceans a tight braided chord of solidarity, of lineage, of blood the flesh and bones of heritage pumping crimson freedom Yes, somewhere,           in even the most                 broken chords                    of heartstrings                 tiny wings beat                             hope
I am not religious at all. But I found a beautiful light energy in an unexpected place (ironically..for most people very expected but for me not), during a holiday that celebrates renewal. Perhaps the concept of renewal is prticularly significant for me at this time; I think it is significant for all of us, at the right time..:) * shofar- ram's horn, blown into on certain Jewish holidays to "remind us of the primordial scream, the eternal voiceless call of the soul expressing its desire to return to its Creator."
lora-lee
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Oct 4, 2016
Oct 4, 2016 at 3:35 AM UTC
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