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The entire room swirls violently, My eyes follow accordingly: around and around, They're not sound from all this hounding and, also, My mind is ragged; torn apart from reality; It's all a blur from which, I find myself nauseous in my bed. Nauseous: Intoxicated by all the ingested foulness, Which mauls my stomach without mercy, For the shy prey; It'll ravage all that peacefully opposes. Now, stabbed by roses they'll be; and bleed they shall. Puckered lips, dry mouth; The halls are clear for the blitz to come, Imposing, it hums a dreaded melody, Referencing the glum future that awaits. Meltdown: Everything is on a breakdown; The swirls become whirlpools, ******* my consciousness out; The assault from inside runs rampant; The down has sung, I'd say, and I'm feeling nauseous, and it's no wonder why: I swam too much in rotten waters, and they drowned me whole. And now, In a hole I'm perishing, Vomiting and twirling impetuously, Suffering eternally from all this disgusting uglyness.
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Sep 30, 2016
Sep 30, 2016 at 7:52 PM UTC
Nauseous
The entire room swirls violently, My eyes follow accordingly: around and around, They're not sound from all this hounding and, also, My mind is ragged; torn apart from reality; It's all a blur from which, I find myself nauseous in my bed. Nauseous: Intoxicated by all the ingested foulness, Which mauls my stomach without mercy, For the shy prey; It'll ravage all that peacefully opposes. Now, stabbed by roses they'll be; and bleed they shall. Puckered lips, dry mouth; The halls are clear for the blitz to come, Imposing, it hums a dreaded melody, Referencing the glum future that awaits. Meltdown: Everything is on a breakdown; The swirls become whirlpools, ******* my consciousness out; The assault from inside runs rampant; The down has sung, I'd say, and I'm feeling nauseous, and it's no wonder why: I swam too much in rotten waters, and they drowned me whole. And now, In a hole I'm perishing, Vomiting and twirling impetuously, Suffering eternally from all this disgusting uglyness.
This goes against my usual style quite a lot, so I guess that it's rather raw; but I wanted to try doing something different, and I'm quite satisfied with the finished product  :) Hope you enjoy it.
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Sep 30, 2016
Sep 30, 2016 at 7:52 PM UTC
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