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Gauche is hiking down Through tangled red forest on Venus mons, prize waits The land parts widely The spring is already running anticipation Gauche lingers on rise The ground trembles in want Gauche travels downhill The canyon is slick The walls quiver joyously A cave is ahead Gauche is tempted by His brother calls from uphill Wait, the ground growls loud Droit has found a peak He wishes to explore in distance another Gauche climbs back to rise Lingers there, Droit makes summit The ground hums in joy Labbra arrives climbs Other peak, breathes heavily Sups on dew at peak Gauche returns to cave Enters, earthquake, happens now Labbra devours Droit clings to the peak Gauche darts in and out of cave Labbra hikes downward Gauche climbs to peak which Labbra left, he continues Down the valley, thirst Labbra reaches rise Rests here for a while, ground squirms Moves toward the cave More quakes begin now Droit and Gauche squeeze and cling tight Labbra drinks at spring The ground quiets down now The brothers leave for now Knight appears, sword drawn Knight approaches cave Sword drawn, he enters, ground moans The brothers return Labbra meets his match Further to the north, agape Entwined they join Peaks reoccupied The brothers Knead the ground The cave closes in Knight attacks with sword The ground squeezes tight Sword plunges faster The ground erupts then The sword breaks and leaks, cave fills All leave now to sleep Epic ecstasy Contented dreams occupy The minds rest renewed.
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Sep 30, 2016
Sep 30, 2016 at 10:59 AM UTC
Adventure to Epic Ecstasy
Gauche is hiking down Through tangled red forest on Venus mons, prize waits The land parts widely The spring is already running anticipation Gauche lingers on rise The ground trembles in want Gauche travels downhill The canyon is slick The walls quiver joyously A cave is ahead Gauche is tempted by His brother calls from uphill Wait, the ground growls loud Droit has found a peak He wishes to explore in distance another Gauche climbs back to rise Lingers there, Droit makes summit The ground hums in joy Labbra arrives climbs Other peak, breathes heavily Sups on dew at peak Gauche returns to cave Enters, earthquake, happens now Labbra devours Droit clings to the peak Gauche darts in and out of cave Labbra hikes downward Gauche climbs to peak which Labbra left, he continues Down the valley, thirst Labbra reaches rise Rests here for a while, ground squirms Moves toward the cave More quakes begin now Droit and Gauche squeeze and cling tight Labbra drinks at spring The ground quiets down now The brothers leave for now Knight appears, sword drawn Knight approaches cave Sword drawn, he enters, ground moans The brothers return Labbra meets his match Further to the north, agape Entwined they join Peaks reoccupied The brothers Knead the ground The cave closes in Knight attacks with sword The ground squeezes tight Sword plunges faster The ground erupts then The sword breaks and leaks, cave fills All leave now to sleep Epic ecstasy Contented dreams occupy The minds rest renewed.
Droit and gauche, French for right and Left, labbra is Italian for lips. An experiment in haiku flow. © 9 months ago
jed-johnson
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Sep 30, 2016
Sep 30, 2016 at 10:59 AM UTC
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