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Flowers bloom, Susie notices, While the weather looms. She blithely sings, "All is sunny, despite the heavens' gloom..." But, near a tomb, Old Man Witherspoon Says it only spells of doom. With spirited skips She twirls As her hair billows and whips. She courageously croons Songs of praise crawling from her lips. But, near a tomb, Old Man Witherspoon Yells, "All only smells of doom!" Then the storm clouds corral Them both and open fire Like a showdown at the OK Corral. Witherspoon bawled: "You're happy to die?!" She countered: "No; but die happy I shall." But, near a tomb, Old Man Witherspoon Shouts, "Your death only tells of doom!" She heeded no single warning. Blissful, the winds lifted her Into the dark morning. See, Susie had determined, "If I must die, I will not die mourning." Meanwhile, above a tomb, Old Man Witherspoon Cries, "Life is merely tales of doom!" Then suddenly, beneath a fine awning, Susie's eyes flashed open To embrace the dawning. Her frantic pants were slowed By a gasp of yawning. A new aura filled her room, Her bed caressed her As her mind began to zoom. She arose in shock by the beaming sun And the flowers' bloom. See, Susie never heeded a single warning, She ignored many blessings— Until that morning. And from thence determined, "If I must die, I will not die mourning." Susie leapt & left from that room, And ventured somewhere— It was near a tomb. She sat next to Old Man Witherspoon And crooned a tune: "All will be sunny, despite the present gloom..."
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Sep 29, 2016
Sep 29, 2016 at 4:08 PM UTC
Her Epiphanous Doom
Flowers bloom, Susie notices, While the weather looms. She blithely sings, "All is sunny, despite the heavens' gloom..." But, near a tomb, Old Man Witherspoon Says it only spells of doom. With spirited skips She twirls As her hair billows and whips. She courageously croons Songs of praise crawling from her lips. But, near a tomb, Old Man Witherspoon Yells, "All only smells of doom!" Then the storm clouds corral Them both and open fire Like a showdown at the OK Corral. Witherspoon bawled: "You're happy to die?!" She countered: "No; but die happy I shall." But, near a tomb, Old Man Witherspoon Shouts, "Your death only tells of doom!" She heeded no single warning. Blissful, the winds lifted her Into the dark morning. See, Susie had determined, "If I must die, I will not die mourning." Meanwhile, above a tomb, Old Man Witherspoon Cries, "Life is merely tales of doom!" Then suddenly, beneath a fine awning, Susie's eyes flashed open To embrace the dawning. Her frantic pants were slowed By a gasp of yawning. A new aura filled her room, Her bed caressed her As her mind began to zoom. She arose in shock by the beaming sun And the flowers' bloom. See, Susie never heeded a single warning, She ignored many blessings— Until that morning. And from thence determined, "If I must die, I will not die mourning." Susie leapt & left from that room, And ventured somewhere— It was near a tomb. She sat next to Old Man Witherspoon And crooned a tune: "All will be sunny, despite the present gloom..."
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Sep 29, 2016
Sep 29, 2016 at 4:08 PM UTC
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