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On Saturn again watching you exist silently on the moon. The craters keep you company as you pick up a silver spoon. You stick it in your mouth— Ah, what fortune in this! Alas, the elation is short lived. I saw a flaxen haired girl from Venus make her way to you. She flew across the stars, her hair turned a lighter shade of blonde by the sun, and like an angel she existed in your presence. Like the rest, those from Pluto and Mars, you sent her back to sail across the stars lingering on your ideals of staring down at the Earth with unruly disdain— I’ll watch you from Saturn as blood drips through my veins. I question your motives, Your heartless façade but deep down inside I’ll love you more than that of the moon and the stars.
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Feb 25, 2012
Feb 25, 2012 at 2:02 AM UTC
Saturn's Devotion
On Saturn again watching you exist silently on the moon. The craters keep you company as you pick up a silver spoon. You stick it in your mouth— Ah, what fortune in this! Alas, the elation is short lived. I saw a flaxen haired girl from Venus make her way to you. She flew across the stars, her hair turned a lighter shade of blonde by the sun, and like an angel she existed in your presence. Like the rest, those from Pluto and Mars, you sent her back to sail across the stars lingering on your ideals of staring down at the Earth with unruly disdain— I’ll watch you from Saturn as blood drips through my veins. I question your motives, Your heartless façade but deep down inside I’ll love you more than that of the moon and the stars.
je-suis-la-lune
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Feb 25, 2012
Feb 25, 2012 at 2:02 AM UTC
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