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Its the darkest planet yet.   This is the warmest we can get.   My hell is my home,   Where the hideous creatures roam. Missing earth,  i asked my dad,   If theres any ideas, that he had.   He told me to shut it,  and be a man,   To grow up,  be as strong as I can.   He told me I will never be warm again,   Stuck on this planet that doesn't spin.   Why dad, why, have you done this to us? You make me so mad,  I want to cuss! It turns out,  it was a  gambling debt.   We were here,  because he lost a bet! That night I took a stone to my dad,   I think he knew, that it was getting bad! That night,  I was ugly as the creatures,   I beat his head in,  with a ******* rock! His head was flat,  and had no features.   Then I was,                      On my own. .   Nobody voices to hear,                                          For I was alone.
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Sep 26, 2016
Sep 26, 2016 at 10:22 PM UTC
Deyru 6 Pegasus
Its the darkest planet yet.   This is the warmest we can get.   My hell is my home,   Where the hideous creatures roam. Missing earth,  i asked my dad,   If theres any ideas, that he had.   He told me to shut it,  and be a man,   To grow up,  be as strong as I can.   He told me I will never be warm again,   Stuck on this planet that doesn't spin.   Why dad, why, have you done this to us? You make me so mad,  I want to cuss! It turns out,  it was a  gambling debt.   We were here,  because he lost a bet! That night I took a stone to my dad,   I think he knew, that it was getting bad! That night,  I was ugly as the creatures,   I beat his head in,  with a ******* rock! His head was flat,  and had no features.   Then I was,                      On my own. .   Nobody voices to hear,                                          For I was alone.
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Sep 26, 2016
Sep 26, 2016 at 10:22 PM UTC
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