Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
#Have you ever been madly in love? The old man broke my reverie. On the long faded green bench white with bird droppings he was peering at me through his silver grey beard looking oddly out of place in that college squire park where only the dreamers at the prime of youth would sit between classes to exchange love notes and steal a kiss when the passion couldn't be reined in. Have you ever been madly in love? he repeated, and then as if growing impatient by my silence mumbled, pausing between words, like they stung him like thorns *it extracts a price been paying all my life living with a void no other woman could fill a commitment that breeds only pain yet makes me insanely boastful of being madly in love.* It was recess hour and the benches were being filled up. How many, I wondered, would still hold hands when the classes are over.
0
Nov 7, 2016
Nov 7, 2016 at 9:58 AM UTC
Madly in Love
#Have you ever been madly in love? The old man broke my reverie. On the long faded green bench white with bird droppings he was peering at me through his silver grey beard looking oddly out of place in that college squire park where only the dreamers at the prime of youth would sit between classes to exchange love notes and steal a kiss when the passion couldn't be reined in. Have you ever been madly in love? he repeated, and then as if growing impatient by my silence mumbled, pausing between words, like they stung him like thorns *it extracts a price been paying all my life living with a void no other woman could fill a commitment that breeds only pain yet makes me insanely boastful of being madly in love.* It was recess hour and the benches were being filled up. How many, I wondered, would still hold hands when the classes are over.
pradip-chattopadhyay
Written by
Nov 7, 2016
Nov 7, 2016 at 9:58 AM UTC
Request permission to use this poem