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I've tried to swim against the tide, but got pulled down to my knees. Drank the water and suddenly I couldn't see. My lungs tried to grasp for air and then I couldn't breathe. Woke up feeling so alive, but the life was just a dream.
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Feb 22, 2012
Feb 22, 2012 at 2:14 PM UTC
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I've tried to swim against the tide, but got pulled down to my knees. Drank the water and suddenly I couldn't see. My lungs tried to grasp for air and then I couldn't breathe. Woke up feeling so alive, but the life was just a dream.
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Feb 22, 2012
Feb 22, 2012 at 2:14 PM UTC
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