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i heard you say softly, you would soon get married, in a passive way. your mum has found a groom she thought perfect, the horoscopes match, and your father, approves. that's that. so nothing much left, except sorting out "our mess" caused by your" thoughtless adventure," as you put it, you now think it was  "just physical" you weren't sure yet wheather it was love, you felt, about me though intense. "that was a whim and i wasn't in my senses as i see it now, when i listen to  my dad and mom ; a  whim ruled my mind i fell for you straight your scent had something to do in that, i could hardly think, every time i almost swooned" your part of the  story has  a  sharp  razor gleam the matador smiles, just before the sword gets the bull, i can almost hear the cheer of spectators, it's the Roman crowd that still calls the shot you and me are pawns, as time  here stand still. that's convenient, isn't it? you are still, and would allways have a disarming charm, i'd never forget that, my lovely war wound! it would remain with me ever. we need to learn to take body and mind in seperate packages, in this quagmiry times. i understand, you are at it, you'll be good. you have this black mole on your cheek, as you speak i was looking at it, as if it has a different life, it now seems a symbol of something, i try to place , but head was muddled, i smell a betrayal, the mole soon would go, suddenly, i felt a whim: to kiss the blakest bit,  still your part. )O(
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Feb 20, 2012
Feb 20, 2012 at 6:43 AM UTC
tragic whim
i heard you say softly, you would soon get married, in a passive way. your mum has found a groom she thought perfect, the horoscopes match, and your father, approves. that's that. so nothing much left, except sorting out "our mess" caused by your" thoughtless adventure," as you put it, you now think it was  "just physical" you weren't sure yet wheather it was love, you felt, about me though intense. "that was a whim and i wasn't in my senses as i see it now, when i listen to  my dad and mom ; a  whim ruled my mind i fell for you straight your scent had something to do in that, i could hardly think, every time i almost swooned" your part of the  story has  a  sharp  razor gleam the matador smiles, just before the sword gets the bull, i can almost hear the cheer of spectators, it's the Roman crowd that still calls the shot you and me are pawns, as time  here stand still. that's convenient, isn't it? you are still, and would allways have a disarming charm, i'd never forget that, my lovely war wound! it would remain with me ever. we need to learn to take body and mind in seperate packages, in this quagmiry times. i understand, you are at it, you'll be good. you have this black mole on your cheek, as you speak i was looking at it, as if it has a different life, it now seems a symbol of something, i try to place , but head was muddled, i smell a betrayal, the mole soon would go, suddenly, i felt a whim: to kiss the blakest bit,  still your part. )O(
k-balachandran
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Feb 20, 2012
Feb 20, 2012 at 6:43 AM UTC
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